Monday, October 1, 2012

2nd weekly blog

Bordem doth insue. This is a quote by me describing my life, boring. It also describes the way most students feel as they do their work. But you should not feel this way if  it is truley your work. So why then do so many students fall asleep in class, truth be told it is because they didn't get enough sleep or they just don't care to make their work a piece of art. You can make your work a piece of art, through a little thing called word choice. although most go students only make it up as they go, they will you word choice to get the higher grade. For example, "The roses smelt like a crisp spring morning eating away at your nose" some may call that a work of art but I call it word choice, many of the authors today make their storys captivating through the descriptive words that they chose. For example if you read, big books such as Eragon you will see that the author might describe one match burning, and it may take them half of the page to do that. People are drawn more to books in which the author can describe things that they will relate to, because it makes you feel like you are part of the story. Not just simply reading the story, or seeing it through anothers eyes.

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